Sunday, September 6, 2009

School Days

Ty is now in the 4th grade. His favorite subject is Latin, he also enjoys Math. Outside of school, he is really, really into Bionicles. Here is a paper he wrote for school about Bionicles.

Preview

This is a preview of the new movie coming out, Bionicle: The Legend Reborn.

Ackar is fighting Strakk, and Strakk loses his shield! He won’t give up. Ackar blocks with his sword …… and delivers a winning blow with his shield! “Yield to me, and this goes no further.”

“Alright, you win,” says Strakk.

Ackar sighed and said, “you leave with your honor intact, and I with your shield. Victory!”

With Ackar’s back turned, Strakk gets up and readies his sword and hurls it!

“Watch out!!” shouted one of the Agori villagers from Vulcanus.

Ackar turns around and blocks but it still flings him. He hits a rock and Strakk wins!

I’m really looking forward to seeing the new movie!

2 comments:

  1. Wow! He did a great job with that! I'm impressed!

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  2. Thanks to Brave Writer! This is from the boy that will say he hates writing. This is his 3rd draft. Started as a freewrite and then revised and then typed (he kept changing and adding things at each step). I'm hoping he will see that writing is more fun, seeing what becomes of taking a freewrite and shaping it into something like this. I also had him make a list of things he would like to write about (at the beginning of the school year), to make writing more fun for him.

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